FicWad

You know, I wasn't going to review, if for no other reason than I wasn't logged in and that's a bit too much work considering I'm eating a veggieburger. But, I remembered your little author's note and I hate when my stories don't get reviewed, so here I am, writing you a nice, long review.
I like this story, make no mistake, but if you could put more action into a given chapter that would be very much appreciated. I like the fact, though, that you're causing Frank this guilt and shame; it's reality and makes the scenario believable. Also, and I don't know /why/, but I absolutely loved the part where Gerard's grandmother said she was going to 'challenge Marge in a rematch'. Don't ask, just accept the compliment for what it is; it practically made me continue reading.

Anyways, I hope you update soon and, admittedly nine days isn't that long, I'm far too hooked to wait longer and half an hour.

Keep writing, love!
Nikki