Wow, a lot happened in this chapter.
So, okay, this is kind of sad. I mean, he’s cutting, but he can’t promise the girl that he loves that he will stop. Well, it’s really hard to stop doing that, more so than A Lot of people think. But still…part of me wishes that he could at least tell her he would…but I don’t know, that would make him dishonest. And that’s not really good. SO I guess he made the right decision after all.
Haha, I love how Nicole was totally prepared to go out, she has all of her make-up and some clothes over there too.
So, what exactly was she having a hard time breathing over? Was it all just too much too soon? I mean it must have been difficult for her to go from being somewhat on her own and carrying this big secret, to having friends that are there for her, especially after they learned about what was going on with her and her father.
“/Evangeline, this is Jersey. That happens all the time. /”
Okay, now it’s time for one of my questions. I’m not sure if you mentioned this before, but did she just recently move to Jersey? Is that why she’s not used to seeing stuff like this?
I still think that it was really well written, the scene between the boy and girl. As I’ve said before, you’re really good at creating an image in the readers head.
Wow…So she got raped and she just realized…Damn…Well I’ve got two Ideas on who it might have been.
A) It could have been her father, because he was always drinking and was really violent, and maybe he did it after he beat her badly enough so that it was already so blurry in her head that her mind could easily repress it.
B) Or it could be the guy that was going to hurt the other girl. The reasoning behind that is maybe after she saw him again, it brought back some kind of memory or something and then she started to panic and then she knew/remembered what had happened to her.
Either way I’m wondering what is going to happen next. I don’t know if she’s going to tell anyone or if she’s going to just run away from them or maybe just keep living with them and try to pretend that nothing has changed and that she’s just upset over her father.
Well, I’m really excited for the next update and I hope you update soon!
Xo-Izzzibee.
By the way, can you please, please, please review my new story? I would be like, eternally grateful to you if you did. :)
Xo- Izzzibee (again, lol)