I agree with everyone else. It's time for them to get back together=) Pete's a mess and Soap's a mess... and messes should be cleaned up.
Oh! and have I ever told you just how much I love the way you change the points of view? When some people do it it's so confusing! But when you do it, it's extremely smooth and makes sense.
And Hemmy's POV is probably my favorite. I just love how he thinks=)
Love it times a million and thirty-three. Can't wait for more!