Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) siledubhghlase 2009-03-27

Excellent and very imaginative. When Mr. Weasley addressed his family in that first council after Ron and Ginny had been arrested, I actually cried for that poor man. He was heartbroken and his wife was perfectly unrepentant.

I was wondering if overexposure to the control potion might have damaged Ron's and Ginny's minds and I was right. After all, drug abuse destroys the mind, the body, the heart, the soul, and the family.

I was glad to see that in a very brief moment of clarity, Ron sort of redeemed himself. For a bried, shining moment, the training the DA offered him paid off.

I was hoping for the same for Ginny, but no. She was just too far gone. I was glad to see Neville come into his own, too.

BRAVO!!!!