FicWad

Really interesting, with one little phrase you turned a cute and amusing Gabrielle mates with Harry because he saved her story and turned it into a much more complex and compelling read.

That phrase?

"Great man, Dumbledore"

You've taken a cheesy line from a secondary player in canon and used it as the keystone to what could be a very interesting plot.

Really well done.

BJH

P.S. Even though I like and look forward to a Harry that can fly using his own wings, and the fireball thing could be fun, please avoid making him superpowered. What fun is a story when the hero is unbeatable. It that made good stories then we would all be writing stories about Albus pre-Harry, eh?