just want to add a fresh woo this is good like it comment. plot wise your great grammer is acceptible not that my spelling and grammer is better just my observation, and the charicters are actting beliveabley for the situations you put them in except for neville i do not like the way he is writtin but it not bad enough to say ahhhhhhh i wont read this its just not what i would do but you do not need to change him in anyway tooo hope you understand.