oh man! were to begin... ive been reading pwp's for a while now and ive found some pretty awsome ones! this is among the top 5. i was REAL. i could see something like this happening in real life (maybe not among panic but other average joes). It was emotional in all the right ways and though it was short kept me reading till the end (which most dont).
This could be turned into a story and if it was i would deffinatly read. But i understand that in some cases that would ruin the story.
still, great story! keep writing!
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