You ask if you should continue? Well, considering the first chapter was less than 600 words and told us nothing, yes, you should because that's not enough to really decide anything by.
I feel it is my solemn duty to inform everyone that there is no such phrase as 'Might of'.
There just isn't. Think about it and you will see it makes no sense at all. The phrase you are looking for is 'Might have'.
Look at this bit from your story:
'You might of thought...' Remove 'might' and all you have is 'You of thought...' Does that make any sense? No.
Do the same to 'You might have thought...' and you get 'You have thought...' Now THAT makes sense!
I know what you're thinking, "But I hear people say it that way all the time!"
No, you don't. Bottom line, if you hear someone say "Might of" there are two possibilities.
1: They are a poor, unfortunate, ignorant, schmuck who is saying it wrong.
-OR-
2: They are actually saying "Might've", which is the contraction for "Might have".
So, you MIGHT'VE mistaken it for something else.
I hope everyone remembers that.