Review for Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-21

Whoaaaaaaa!! That was epic, dude. O_O

Damn you William and your blank-eye, tranforming powers! >.<

Poor Natalie!! D:
Ugh, William is such a douche.

Very awesome update. :)
(My chapter was SUPPOSED to be up today, but it's father's day and I'm pretty much going to have zero time to upload, but it will be up sometime. I promise)

-Natalie

Author's response

Ta lol no worries i can wait.