Hi there,
I felt so sad for her when she was at the cemetary, and I love the whole butterfly sequence. It was cool that Bob drove by seeing a person and not realizing it was her.
I see Frankie is still having taser problems, LOL!!
That was sweet of Bob offering to listen.
I love the whole talking to themselves too funny.
It's cute how she's starting to think of him that way.
Looking forward to more when you can!!
Author's response
Thank you Moonshyne! (:
Aww yeah, writing the cemetary part was fun (: I had to throw Bob not realizing it was her, hehe.
Yup poor Frankie, and his taser problems, just can't seem to understand how to operate those things....
Bob was nice this time (:
And yeah writing the inner thoughts was idk... (:
Thanks again, I appreciate it.