You ask me to fucking read your bullshit stories and then insult me when I point out the obvious fact that they SUCK? I'm sorry, I'm not being nice about this anymore, this story is terrible, there is no plot and you have no grasp of the english language. You try to write with eloquence, but you fail so badly that it just turns into senseless garbage. A fifth grade language arts student could write better than you.
And really, are you going to insult my literacy? Me? At least I have the ability of using proper punctuation. That is the main reason why nobody reads your crap.
Excuse me for trying to guide you so that you could at least attempt to improve. I'm never doing that again, don't worry. Now please continue to write shitty plotless stories that nobody reads.
Thank you for your time,
Crys.
p.s. You spelled cinnamon wrong.
Author's response
yeah i know thats cool.
I belive i said bye now?
Ps i dont give a shit.
:)
Heavy water - 71 views
Ch.2 bring me something - 43 views
We are broken - 26 views
Cut up angles - 7 views
And on mibba the views are about double. Those views are more than enough for me and the people that contact me on MySpace love the stories and there is a plot. I just haven’t finished the fucking story yet.
When we learn to be civil, ill talk to you then.
Hey. Sorry my friend checked my reviews and story views for me. I just got my internet back up, im sorry she feels the need to be rude to someone either one of us know.
I really am sorry.