Awwww god I felt like crying reading that dude! Hahha
Messed up but I actually can't write Spanish for shit. It's weird. But thank you. And you did good.
I love how you put the spotlight on certain characters each chapter. Very cool. :)
Lovvvved it.
Gabe better come back!!
Ahah update soon fellow Natalie. :)
-Natalie
Author's response
Ola: thats as far as my spanish goes and i'm pretty sure it aint spelt right. .Thanks. Yes the spotlight will shine on everyone (eventually)