Review for Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

(#) dennisud 2009-07-13

Nice continuance. I do though want more from the kids themselves and how they perceive their parents trying not only to protect them, but get them ready for the upcoming fight.

I suggest adding Ameila and Susan Bones to the mix as per Amelia's position and possible influence.

BTW would Harry need two wives for both Houses?
If so Susan can pair up with Neville and you could add Hannah Abbott for his 2nd wife.

dennisud

P.S. Oh and the Patils could work too!