nice work.. the story seems to be flowing really well... there are a few places that require touch-ups but on the whole a job really well done... looking forward to the companies that are being formed and the unique ideas from both grangers in contracts to the wizards... i can just see sirius having a secret plan to form harry's harem.... hehehe... i know this is mostly Harry/hermione, but i wouldn't mind Fleur and Nymmy add to the mix... but that is for the future.
looking forward to a few dialouge between the kiddies as well.