Review for Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

(#) Hamm_On_Wry 2009-07-16

Good plotline, however you need to go back into the previous two chapters and edit them in order to get rid of the confusion between the different timelines. The first two chapters have the canon timeline, then you switch for the third. By 1991, the Reagan-Thatcher alliance was two years dead and the pendulum was swinging back the other way.

Once you get the chapters integrated it should work out okay.