Sorry about the really really SHORT review..my dad said I wasn't allowed on the computer so I snuck on while he was in the bathroom but anyways!
The eye discription(as many have said) was probably the best part in this..well.. ok, next to the kissing ^^ I like how Jacob is the MAJOR creep and is probably on meds. The funny part is my friend's ex is named Jacob..and that twilight guy is Jacob.. and this othe creep I know is named Jacob =O
Anyway, here's a cute face ==^::^=
REVENGE
Author's response
hmm. i don't know anyone named jacob. ... oh well.