holy fucking shit... they are the only words that come to mind right now...
first time reviewer as this is the first time I have come across this story.... and I loved it.. some things are a little cliche, but you tell an awesome story... gripping in fact...
give me more, give me more!!!
Author's response
:D yay for reviews!
they make me happy.
thank you. i'll try to work onthe clicheness.