(#) Sassy 2009-07-20
That was EXCELLENT!!!! I just couldn't stop reading it!!
A sad story, delicately told. When Frank was crying, it felt real, touching and not overly-dramatic (which is an easy trap to fall into).
I can't believe you took this down, but I'm glad you reposted, it's a lovely story. Well thought out, wonderful dialogue,romance without everyone leaping into bed as soon as they meet and really well paced.
You should be really proud of this!
Sas x
Author's response
Thankies so much! I figured since I'm getting "oh so popular" on this account, I might as well post older stories on this one. Although, there's one that I really don't want to repost LoL it's so poorly written, and it's my first actual fic. But I might just rewrite it or something ^^
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