(#) Xadro 2009-08-04
Hmmm i really enjoyed your fic the only downside was what his sister had done with Malfoy, quite disgusting, getting Draco's sloppy seconds is quite distasteful. I would have rather have that she was still an innocent virgin instead of Harry being one, which was also disappointing.
But the rest is great, i hope you wont do anything to his sister anymore she has suffered enough.
- Xadro