Review for Fully Alive

Fully Alive

(#) Moonshyne 2009-08-08

Hi.

I swear I reviewed this story. I definitely read the first three chapters at once and knew I reviewed it, but it might have been that ficwad didn't post it.


Poor Layla the poor thing has so many addictions. At least she's away from Daniel,and getting off the drugs. I hope Frank realizes what she is doing to herself.

I was so glad when she wrote Ray the letter and telling him how she really felt. It was good for her to get things out.

I love everything you write. I'm really hooked and so look forward to getting up on Saturday morning knowing that you've updated on your stories.

Again have a great time in Vegas, and remember what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas!! (unless you feel like sharing)

Author's response

Aww it's okay and thank you (:

Layla definitely needs to find time for herself and learn that her ways are not doing and justice, she's only hurting herself even more.

Ray is pretty much her only way of expressing her outward feelings, cause she's ahsamed to tell Frank, when he actually could be her only help.

Thank you for the compliment! I have stories if you would like to hear them lol.