Oh! Real review: by "souress" do you mean "sorceress"? That's a woman who can cast spells and do magic and stuff. Also, do you mean the stone of "chaos"? Chaos is pronounced Kay-Oss and means total disorder. I can't tell if this is what you mean by looking at your writing. These aren't just little spelling errors; they're crippling.
Author's response
ok,your first comment was nice of you to tell what a beta reader is, but this one, that makes me feel angry on how you rubbed it in that way. i mean, how would YOU like it if you suck at selling/grammer so bad that you get nothing but flames on how they are better then spelling and blab, blab blab and they give you the lowest ranking possable. if you i sucked at spelling so bad, then why don't YOU be mine beta reader?