I'm the first to review looks like. Okay, so, I love this story! I like everyone's point of view. It shows how everyine feels about the situation at hand. Maybe you should write about how they go on the date and then after the date. If that helps at all. Anyway, can't wait for more!
XOXOX ANDREA. =} =] =) :} :] :) (ALL SMILIES FOR YOU!)