OOooh, this sounds really good... ooh, you should make Eric really hott, so Delilah falls for him, and Julius is jealous and suspicious, but Delilah lacks on her missions and crap, so then Dr Dismay can steal the diamond, and then things pull together, Delilah dumps Eric 'cause he's a villain, and there's a big fluffy end scene! srry, lol, i'm writing your story for you... srry, but that was just kinda floating in my head after reading that chappy... ANYWAYS... that was great, lol, i loved the names... Mr. X Dismay... lol, please update soon!
Author's response
That's a cool idea. I can work with some of that. And yes, for all you ppl, eric is hot.