That girl! (She sounds a bit like me minus the tan, haha.) Why did she turn him into a ghost? I wonder. Who is she?!
And poor Pete, I just want to give him a hug! Or better yet, to get Patrick back and for him to give Pete a hug :3
I'm dying to know what happens next. (no pun intended)
Author's response
Really? That's cool! :D Whenever I introduce a female character, I always have them look nothing like me so that no one can say it's a MarySue or a self insert - I'm pale-ish with black hair, blue eyes and so far from 17 it's not even funny!
But of course, no one knows what I look like (unless they read this, of course) so the people that would might anyway! sigh I'm really off on one tonight aren't I? I've overdone the cherries again - cherry Actimel, cherry cordial and cherry ice cream! Loooooove cherries!
Anyway, to get back to the response -
She turned him into a ghost because he suggested that's how he felt so it's sort of a 'Really? Try it out then!'
Who is she? Sorry, can't say yet.
I wouldn't give Pete a hug just yet - he's soaking wet! But yes, he's in need of a hug. Maybe wait until he's got changed and dried his hair?
Thanks for the review! More soon!! :D
Sas x
note to self - lay off the cherries