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In this Pool of Blood, as We're Touching Hands
In this Pool of Blood, as We're Touching Hands
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sickly_ill
2009-09-12
Okay, this story was very..short and has poor GPS (Grammar, Puncuation, Spelling). It was good, but too fast and rough/raw. You need to add detail and imagery. But it was okay.
XOXOX ANDREA. =]