i love it. poor patrick. stuck in a gay club all alone. syupid pete. what kinda idiot would do that? lol no offence to anyone. y doesnt patrick just leave? poor, poor pat. update soon please!
Author's response
ahahaha you have found every last hole in my story! I'll try and explain.
Okay Pete thought Patrick was winking because he WANTED to stay, because I've decided that pete is going to be an idiot in this story.
And um Patrick tries to leave..in the next chapter and it doesn't work out to well!!
glad ur liking it, cuz i cannot stop writing!!
ahahaha you have found every last hole in my story! I'll try and explain.
Okay Pete thought Patrick was winking because he WANTED to stay, because I've decided that pete is going to be an idiot in this story.
And um Patrick tries to leave..in the next chapter and it doesn't work out to well!!
glad ur liking it, cuz i cannot stop writing!!