Nooooo!!!!!! You can't stop there!!!! Patrick! Oh the poor guy's so scared. But it sounds as though the guys are close enough to get him out in time. And that Pete's going to kill Francisco!! He can't possibly believe that Patrick's willing despite all his protests. Poor Trick! :'(
great stuff!! Looking forward to more!!
Glad you did so very well with your report!!! :D
I still think you're partner was an idiot to cause you so much trouble. Lessons learned...
a) Dont get partnered with idiots
b) keep your own copy!
Sas x
Author's response
Oh trust me if I ever get partnered with that boy again, his name will mysteriously appear on the foreign exchange list, straight to Guam with him! Hehe where is Guam?
Anyway glad ur liking the story, I don't want to end it, so I'm stick a few twists in tonight :) call me selfish