As I was reading I was thinking, 'Oh that bit's really funny, I'll mention that in the review' but then there were just too many to mention! Though, I must say the bit were Pete solemnly promises to get Patrick laid really stuck in my mind. I could really picture that happening. Oh and the bit where the magic sceptre bounced off the toilet and got Ryan, I like that too!! :D
Really funny!! :D
Sas x
Author's response
hahaha thanks :)
Glad your liking it so far!
And Ryan getting hit by the scepter was my absolute favorite part as well haha silly brendon....