Review for A Surprising Day Out With You

A Surprising Day Out With You

(#) areyounormal 2009-09-27

OMG!! I nearly killed the guys!!! 0_0

So cool though! That was such a great surprise!! This is the second story I've turned up in!! :D (I saved Patrick from becoming a sex slave in the other!)

I loved the line about 'extreme sexual torture' and the ringtone - that was so funny! Aww and the ending was sweet!

Loved it and not just because I was in it!

Sas x

Author's response

No! You did not almost kill them! It was the parachute. hahaha well....they didn't die so it's all good

And I think I have read the other one you starred in, it was by patbtrtnpete right? Shes one of my faves of this site :)

Glad you liked it