What a twist!!! I'm practically in tears reading about Emily, and just wow...This is such a good twist, and I'm glad Sarah saw what was happening, I just hope it lasts? I'm looking forward to more, and I can't wait to read about Alyssa and Gerard since Bob slashed her phone! Just WOW! (:
Amazing job as always.
xoxo
Author's response
Hi there,
Thanks so much on the twist. Do you know how long I've been waiting to write this?
The part with Emily was difficult to write because the whole time she equated what her "father" was doing was love and now she finally knows it's not. Sarah now understands that neither her nor Lawrence right now are suitable parents. Emily will be staying put. There maybe one or two more chapters then an epilogue depending how big I want to make the next chapter.
Now that the Emily issue is resolved we can start to resolve who Alyssa will end up with. Will it be the love of her life or the father of her child that has been her rock and twice has given her the greatest gift in the world. Hmmmm. We'll just have to see.
I'll just say I to make sure nothing is written without a further purpose.
I've already started hopefully sometime this week.