i read it. i read it. i read it. everyone sitting over in the corner area was asking me what is so damned funny. they actually came out of service to see what the hell was going on. you used so many of our inside jokes...and it WORKED!!! this was the BESTEST story you've ever written, i feel. no sequel, i say, but that's entirely up to YOU. and thanks for including me in your thank yous. that really makes me feel awesome.
GIRL.
you've got it.
just like i told you God would give it to you.
shunned?
hellz no! for what?
having absolutely original talent?
puh-leez.
LUMA.
you done it.
i loved it.
you're fantastic.
this sotry.
is.
FANTASTIC.
and i'm coming home.
next week this time, i'll be back in san fran.
and we can play the Scenario Game with this story.
i can't believe you used the NoooOOOooo thing when Mikey found out there was another baby in there.
i bet i'm going to get bannde from worship.
or at least from using the computer during worship time.
i bet even God was laughing at this one.
i love this story, i love you, and keep writing like i told you!
i'll call you when i can, i can't get to the phone.
you told me the ending over the phone, but reading it was WAAAAAAAAAY better!!!!
w0ot-w0ot!!!!
Author's response
Oh gosh Jahnecakes, what are you doing? Lol.
SO happy you finally read it and approve! Thank you for your marvelous words, you certainly know how to pep talk me lmao. I can't believe I wrote this, I did put so many inside jokes xD Hope you are coming home, and I'll be waiting patiently for you to call me, cause I miss you! but I understand your situation so no worries (: Thank you so much bestie for the lovely comments, I really appreciate that, and I will keep writing, because no matter how many times I tell myself I'm not, it never works. I have written so much, and I'm actually thank that God gave me a voice, and the ability to write, because I honestly have nothing else besides the music. Looking forward to reading Birthday Party, and can't wait until we talk again.
Luv you lots.
xoxo Luma.