Review for The Lost Music Inside

The Lost Music Inside

(#) Moonshyne 2009-10-17

Hi me again,

I really loved this chapter. The friendship between her and Shanna is amazing, they both need to have that person who is behind them 100%. It was sweet that she took her to her favorite spot and it had the same effect on Shanna.

I didn't expect Desirae to tell Bob so soon, but the moment felt right. Though he realizes it or not he needs someone to talk to. She knows how it feels though in many ways she doesn't. She was so young when her mother passed away though she feels the reprecussions every day she just didn't have the understanding at the time.

I know it sounds confusing I just think that though she does understand at the same time she can't really. Anyway I really loved the interaction between the two of them. It's a natural flow.

Looking forward to the next update.

One a side note; I hope your mom's okay and will be better soon.

Author's response

Hey Moonshyne :)

I agree, they do need to have someone they feel they could trust. It was a real moment for Desirae having to share her favorite spot, but she knew it was a good enough reason. Shanna will begin to realize how special one place can be, if you take the time to appreciate it.

I know, I wasn't sure if I had rushed it, but I don't want to lag anymore, and I've been waiting patiently to write the main ideas, I wanted to for the longest time. Desirae can relate to an extent, with having several memories of her mother, but then she wasn't able to witness her mother dying everyday, so I think I get what you are trying to say.

Thank you as ever for reviewing, I really appreciate it.

Thank you again, my mom is feeling a lot better, still sore, but she's very active so she doesn't stay down for too long lol (:

xoxo