Review for Brother, Please Come Home To Me.

Brother, Please Come Home To Me.

(#) Moonshyne 2009-11-07

Hi,

Yes I missed this story very much.

Yay they're finally off.

I loved Frank's kidnapping too, he must have been scared shitless but I really loved when he realized who his 'kidnappers' were, priceless.

I have to admit I also loved Ray's explanation of what his mother said. I could so picture Ray trying to explain that and it must have been fun to write.

I felt so bad for Mikey that his parents never gave him the support and encouragement they should have. I guess it's a good thing that he found it in himself and his friends.

The letter at the end was heartbreaking especially when he said that his friends cared more about him then they did.

I'm looking forward towards their trip to California and staying with what relative of Ray's that is actually living out there. LOL!!!

Author's response

Hi there (:

Lol, Frank's kidnapping was something I just thought of on the spot..poor thing can't catch a break in my stories lol!

Yes, it was fun to write. I could honestly picture him saying that. His mother is just super strict xD

Unfortunately Mikey's parents weren't winners of the awards for best parents of the year, but Mikey has developed so much on his own, he's figuring out he never needed it all. The letter was ultimately his true realization of it. They really are off now, and it is too late to turn back..but luckily he has amazing friends (:


I'm sure you'll get to see what relative actually does live out there (:

Thanks for reviewing (: