nice but i always hated the whole human girl crap, why not .......uh....make lynz a vampire and gee the helpless human?
yeah. i like that so much better
and the whole heath thing was a bit confused and i do not think it was needed
it was ok, but i know you can do better, so amaze me!
Author's response
haha okay. Lyn-Z WILL be in this story, so don't worry.