Review for The Setting Sun

The Setting Sun

(#) girlinthemoon 2009-11-10

I agree that getting that line was great. :)

Bringing in Pete's family is going to be interesting. Can't wait to see you take this. Nice update.

Author's response

=) I'm liking where it's going and I justy decided on a twist the other day and I have it worked out on paper, but it won't be coming up until later chapters =) But, I can't wait to see more reviews from you and the others =0

=) I'm liking where it's going and I justy decided on a twist the other day and I have it worked out on paper, but it won't be coming up until later chapters =) But, I can't wait to see more reviews from you and the others =)