Hi there,
That was absolutely beautiful and had me all teary eyed at the end.
They way you wrote how Emilie was feeling as a mother who's child was dying was absolutely stunning. How hard it was in the end to let go but knowing it was the right thing to do.
It's not fair to keep someone who has no hope of recovering alive and in pain. Emilie truly did what was best for her daughter even though it wasn't the best for her. The true sign of love and unselfishness.
I started crying when Lyndsey told her story how a child had been saved by her daughters heart, the one thing that kept going in the end.
Though it never takes the pain away I'm sure it still helped knowing a piece of her was still alive and keeping someone that way too.
Simply amazing and heartwrenching!!
Author's response
Hi Moonshyne,
Thank you for the compliments, I really did cry while writing this, it's very emotional one for me..
Exactly, sometimes you have to what your heart says and let someone go to know they will be pain free and in peace. Emilie definitely had to make a huge choice, but she knew it was a good one.
When Lindsey came in, I rewrote it so many times, wondering if people would like it, but you always prove me wrong!
I'm glad you and everyone who reviewed liked it. It means alot to me. Again, thanks for all of you reviews.
xoxo