Review for Caught Up In This Web

Caught Up In This Web

(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-11-23

I found a song! Incase you need it, don't laugh at my crappy skills to write songs! I suck. It's bad but...sure. I mean you can change it if you want. MURKUN.

The wind blows
Hand in hand and off we go
The whispering voices makes it hard
The ground below our feet rattles and we take off
And if it makes you sad to see us go
Look at the sky and remember the good ones

So hold on and don't let go
We'll get out
I don't know how
Imprisoned by our own minds
Then we fall asleep

Dream land, dream land
There we are set free
I feel your touch
Here you are

There's hope, only when our eyes are closed
Here we both know there's hope
Running under the sky
Bathing in the stars

Dream land, dream land
There we are set free
I feel your touch
Here you are

Resting with the dead
Everything is at peace
Here at dream land
Where no one lives

Dream land, dream land
There we are set free
I feel your touch
Here you are.

Author's response

Thank you!
I rather like that song xD
May I keep it and put music to it?
LoL