Review for The Setting Sun

The Setting Sun

(#) areyounormal 2009-11-30

Great chapter! Nice one for getting to know the new characters a bit more. Though Nate needs to calm down and remember that Pete is her brother. Ain't nothing gonna happen between them (I hope! Lol!)

On to the next :D

Sas x

Author's response

lol no nothing is going to happen between him and Hil, but Nate is just worried about what's going to happen to the woman he loves since Pete is just as strong as him. I love the new characters as well, I'm definitely enjoying the creating of them =)