Review for The Setting Sun

The Setting Sun

(#) areyounormal 2009-12-07

Oh yes!! Very tense chapter! Poor Gabe all shot up and swearing - bless! I wonder when he'll realise how close he is to the truth of who is behind it all.
And Salcido - who'd have guessed? Serves him right for turning up in the wrong place! I wonder how 'brave' he is when he's being questioned?

Great update! Looking forward to more.

Sas x

Author's response

Yeah, I was hoping I would give you guys a twist that no one was really expecting and it worked!! =) But yes, I hated making that scene but I think it turned out awesome =)

Trust me, when he's being questioned, you're gonna wanna hit him. I did and I'm the one that wrote it lol. Talk to you next Monday :D