It's very unusually, but i like it. And about pairing... Harry will be with 3 girls(Hermione, Luna... Who's third?), won't he? I'll be very glad if so.
Author's response
thanks for your opinion. yes hermione and luna are two of the three and the third will be revealed in the next chapter or the one after. heres a hint though, what girl character up to the fourth book is most likely to smell like tears and tap water, based on their current status, try thinking outside the box