The arguments and teasing between Revan and Bastila was quite amusing. I too started to find Bastila to be a snotty know-it-all. But little by little, we too learned to accept each other and grow closer.
I can't help but to feel awe when reading these chapters. That you are a highly skilled writer, even superior to me, I have no doubt. I notice that you only have a few chapters of this story and i hope and pray you will make more... this is great. I want to hear what HK-47 thinks about her... see if ya can master his feelings, thoughts and vocabulary.