I'm loving the story! Also, on account of your name, did you get it from Death Before Disco, the song MCR played somewhere and is now all over the internet? Its a line in it, I know that much but anyway, I got my name from that song, so it'd be pretty cool if someone else did too.
Keep up the brilliant work!
Lu
Author's response
Yea, I read the Death Before Disco lyrics like... a month or two ago? I've had thepartybreaksdown as my username on the mcrmy for about two months, so I read them back then. xD