Hey, well done - I'm really enjoying the characters! You wrote them really well! I liked your idea that Delilah had to go n vacation alone - o many stories they're together, it was nice to see what would happen if they were apart. V cute how they texted so much. Why didn't Dismay just call Delilah on Julius' phone, though?
Tiny bit of criticism - watch your spelling in places.
That's it! Well done, and I hope you will continue - I want to see them get Dr Dismay back!!!