That was really good! But, at like the end did you mix up Holly and Tori's names when Tori was talking to Frank? Its okay if you got mixed up. You must update at once or I shall die.
Author's response
No, i didn't mix them up. Frank knew that Holly had to be inside because Tori was her best friend and wouldn't leave Holly alone when she was that upset. So he's trying to get Holly to hear him.