Really liked this one. Probably my favourite out of your collection on here. I love how you've taken a really small moment and focused in on it. The repetition of his words really reminded me of the way I deal with hurtful things anyone ever says to me (doesn't happen that often fortunately!) where you go over the words again and again and again. Very nicely done.
Author's response
Thanks, it's one of my personal favorites of my works. I'm glad the repition didn't seem too, well, repetitive