What a GOOD CHAPTER!
Srsly.
One thing i don't get, why did they not use a condom? Do people not get pregnant anymore? idk idk.
Its good that Alyn is actually fighting her feelings for Gerard, it would be pretty boring if she just submitted to him. I'm slightly surprised she doesn't think about Ray or Frank more though.
I guffawed at Gerard at the end there lol! He had a tough childhood and all, but when he said something like /why could he not be loved?/m, i was just thinking, maybe because you killed Alyn's best friends? Best way to worm your way into her heart ovio.
More soon please :)
Author's response
I know right, i thought that after i posted so i felt like it was a shitty chapter. also... since you ask about the condom i might as well tell you that you are on the right track with your comment... lol.