Hmmm yeah I know what you mean with over and under thinking. I have a bit of the same problem, I basically have the whole story wrapped up in my head but now I have to write it down and I don't like to write 'boring' parts. You know when you need to explain and insert their information in a good interesting way and blaaaa... I really hope you don't give Gerard a soft spot, I like him being unpredicatble and personally I would be bummed if he would act like a love-sick pup. But I am a big fan of angst and all those weird psycho things, can also love fluff and sugar-coated but that doesn't really fit with this story if you ask me, personal oppinion. Girl, you know I've been thinking about this story since I finished the last updated chapter. Because I sort of place myself into their situations. and if I was Alyn I'd simply try to survive and playing slut, yeah if that's what it takes. Gerard, I'm still not sure what is deal is, is he in love with her (hope not) is he just completly obsessed with her (which is funny because she's obsessed with him, it's like a celeb stalking his stalker)or is he just a bit shocked that someone didn't react the way he figured all girl would react to him (the pessimist!) bet he didn't see this twist comming:P Awww I really love his complex and that he sort of somewhere has a human side dying to get out. Owh and for I forget! You really gave me a lot of insperation to continued my own psycho fic so thank you for writing this!
and since I'm the noob around this site, aren't I suppose to get a mail telling me someone review or replied to me? Like how does it work, do I need to search my own story if I wanna check if someone reviewed?
that was all for now, good luck writing!
X Nuky
Author's response
I am actually new to this site too, so I do not really know all the ins and outs yet. Yeah I hate writing boring informational parts. Like when I was writing about Gerard's child hood! ugh! I thought it horrendous! Yea I wanna work on his complex more and more, I like it right now, and How I wrote the story was, it was just a basic Idea in my head, and when I sat down to write it, I wrote what came to me. It was sort of spur of the moment writing, and now I am paying for it. Because now, everything has to string together some how. So I sort of shot myself with that one. I am glad I inspired you to write your fic! I am gonna love reading it if you post!
Yea the next chapter is hard, I really can not skip into months, I SHOULD be going back to the police and writing about them, and It would be sorta soon to see if Alyn is pregnant, ya know? so it is kinda hard. Since this is my first story I suppose I am living and learning from my writing mistakes. Thank you for the update I will always reply to your reviews. Yea I never get an email telling me if I have a review or not, so idk bout that.