I love how you had this in Gerard's POV. It was interesting to see how a serial killer thinks. (Even if he is a fictional killer.) It was neat to read because you learn alot about people through their thoughts. And it's always nice to learn more about Gerard in this.
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Yea i like writing in G's pov, it helps me, help you guys see into his head. Which saves me a bunch of questions to answer lol. I plan on writing a couple more like "mental diary" entries, of his thoughts, so I hope you guys find it good to read :)