FicWad

Well this will be referring back to your reply to my reviw on your other story; I might aswell say it now rather than on your next chapter to 'Art Of Love' ::: Omg yes, Orlando was amazing. It was so hot. It's been quite hot over here, but when I got back to Englad I felt like I was freezing- just wasnt used to being back. Ok- On to 'My Dark Angel'

Ha, this is awesome. Seriously, It's written well, the chapter is long (not that that even matters ;) ) It's very detailed and expresive, and as everyone else has said- It is unique.
I definantly want to read more, no doubt about it. Looks like I'm not the only one who likes it Referes to above comments.


Ok so, I love the way you were switching between the two characters at the begining, that actaully made it more tense which was great. And the time skip was good aswell, you didnt need to waste time writing lots of unnecessary infomation so you missed it out and just aged everyone by a few years; that was done really effectivly- we had the basic idea about the alcohol adbuse with both characters, and Lucy's memory loss, without having to write too much, and leaving us wanting to know more about whats really been happeing.

As much as I love 'The Art Of Love' I have to say, this is written alot better so far.
Oh, and I get that problem too, I can't write a story with my name in it; it just dosen't feel right at all, lol.

Well, I will add this to my favorites; and look out for an update.
Can't wait!

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Storm x