Ha, oh cool! I like this chapter... It just says so much even though there's not much there. It's kinda weird the way that works.
Does your English teacher honestly think you're bad? She must (She is a she right?) be bloody blind. In a sence I'd rather be told I was bad... My English teacher thinks my detail and description in my writing is amazing, and it's really embarassing when she says it all the time... Seriously, teachers are as bad as parents, always say the wrong thing at the wrong time. I can't help but wonder if they do it on purpose... -_-
Ok, intentinal ramble there, 'casue I'm imensly bored and I've havent been able to talk about crap for like, 20 minutes!!! LOL, I don't really talk this much, it's only when I type away really. ;)
Well, I look forward to reading some more! On Sunday... I guess, seeing as thats what you said at the end of this chapter. I'll look out for it! ^_^
Author's response
;) short but sweet is the answer to this I think!
She thinks I could 'do better'. I tend to hold back at school, I go to a private school (parents choice, not mine) so you have to be more 'prim and proper' not 'lets write fan fiction about abusive relationships and alcohol':'(
ah well, I'm meant to get a B in english lit. I can deal with that :)
Thanks for the review!
Lu